Competition Winners
Derbyshire Lit Fest mini-mobile saga winners
Here are the winners of the Derbyshire Literature Festival Mini-Mobile saga writing competition. Each winner won a year’s subscription to Young Writer.
The winners were:
12-16 years category: Catherine Brown, High Peak, Cheshire
8-11 years category: Emily Hill, Alfreton, Derbyshire
7 years and under category: Olive Turner, Wirksworth, Derbyshire
The mobile library, by Catherine Brown
“Hello”, said the man,
“Morning”, said the woman.
“Could you direct me to the thrillers?”
“There”.
He noticed them, ahead, feeling quite foolish. He also noticed the woman’s eyes.
“I’m in love”, he thought. The woman didn’t think she was in love. She thought she was in a mobile library.
Commotion, by Emily Hill
I got on the library bus,
as the engine was cooling down.
Went to the desk,
There stood a man with a frown.
He needed a rest,
demanded a break.
He started tantruming,
What a scene did he make.
He started stomping up and down,
and started chanting GORDON BROWN……
Olive’s Adventure, by Olive Turner
Jas and Pod went to the beach to see the world. They got on a boat because they wanted to see the world go by. There was an earthquake, BANG goes the pots and pans. “Help! I am pregnant.” I woke up suddenly in the mobile library. We were moving…
4 responses so far ↓
1 Annaliese // Sep 20, 2008 at 4:01 pm
i think both of those poems were excellent i think both of you are on your way to a poetry carreir well done
2 Elly // Sep 24, 2008 at 6:27 pm
well done
3 Beth // Oct 14, 2008 at 6:36 am
great work every1. please go on
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4 abi // Nov 14, 2008 at 4:18 pm
well there ok but not really enough to go in to a carriar in poetry
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